Third music video edit

This is my third video edit. I have changed a couple of shots after the last hot desking, for example : I have cut on the videos of the girl leaving the room.

I have also tried to make the story much clearer of what have happened.

I have asked my audience some questions which are important to me at the moment :

- Are there too many shots of the kid running around ?

My audience have said that because of the amount of kid shots they can understand better what is happening, that the main actress is not only losing a man, but losing a kid as well as the unity of the family. It has been mentioned that it made it deeper and more interesting to watch.

- What about the colours? Should I put the filter over the video?

Audience said that I do not need any filters, however I could try and do two edits - one with auto corrected brightness and the other original one and asses it then.

- Are there too many overlayed videos?

It explains story much better, as you can notice that it is a memory more than anything. Also it works well with this exact story. Moreover the audience have noticed that the first shot of the video is the same as the last one - so this means I have done what I wanted. Audience will be aware that there is not 100% the whole story actually happened, maybe she was only thinking about it while walking.



I am happy with my edit right now, however I think I want to change something about the colours. It has been mentioned that I have matched the beat very well with visuals which makes it clearer and used a wider variety of shots - audience want to watch it all to understand what it is about.